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To My Lover

If in fury, you are late for the bridge,
I will wait for you.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    A tender telling, Scribe. What more loving thing could one say to another? Beautiful. Wanda


  • quantumsurveyor
    March 9, 2008
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    Que?


  • cvillelisa
    March 9, 2008
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    I like this draft.
    Lots.












  • ca ne fait rien
    March 9, 2008
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    He also serves who stands and waits.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    good job that you do... otherwise you might get another vase chucked at you... or worse a stilletoe shoe !!

    great

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