Birth opportunity poetry, very young's rhythmic need
Accents my thoughts; access feelings over breast bacteria required:
Maze me into my musing as counting over ten toes not nipples wired~
Specifically unsecret, hand husband's wrist massaging infant's leg...
Author notes
must get off computer, may change my mind about current satisfaction when at more ease somewhat yet I'm not guessing entry!
[did a a bit of a redo with return]
I haven't just shoveled out an acrostic
but extended my acronym of babies are my subject!
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good luck isn't harmoniously oriented; Isaiah 65:11
please comment livelily,
without unnatural emoticons NOR the applause at all
A contest entry
- March Acrostic Madness by alaskanamber.
425 points, ended April 2, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
never wanting to break a pretty
Comments
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great poem
I really liked the words and the subject. Good job.
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sir sigh of relief
Kyoko-Benjiro thanks for forming kind words for my form write
I ought to not take so long to reply, but I get surprised it's pleasing when behind the scenes I think it needs something. nice feedback timing. especially when I felt rushed to make it into contest and schedule as got mentioned, for recheck. I gave it a couple switches, but it's basically as you complimented so thank you for that advocacy. this one was kind of important for focus...
I'll put a separator in author notes updates so it could stand out I'm not looking for the applause symbol just some speech about what went well or didn't.
again, I appreciate your coming to visit,
babies are my subject
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