disneyland of tours
arranged Japanese tourists
move like schools of fish
hatched for a tropical tank
spawning money in florida
A contest entry
- TANKA TIME by Swan song.
650 points, ended March 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
disneyland of tours
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Unusual in a good way. Creativly outside the box.
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This is very good funny and clever also
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How
How can one fashion a better way of saying it. For sure not I
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FInd this similar to Banff in Alberta, Canada - buses and buses of Japanese tourists re always there, no matter what the season or month. Even the stores are now more Japanese run with Japanese writing than Canadian owned. Know exactly what you speak of in your lovely tanks poem. Great for the economy though....
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..."spawning money in florida"...isnt that WHAT Florida is all about? GREAT write....
Lady D
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yes it is what i came down to FLORIDA for all the tourists spawning money and the warm sun [not so warm today though only 60] thanks much for the read regards zaj
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