I hear you two again...arguing with all your heart
I know that you may not be screaming
But I know your heart is
Inside I can feel your heart breaking, leaking
Cause it's screaming inside...but you don't let
It run out you try to keep it in.
And love I'm gonna tell you now there's no use pretending.
You don't think I can see that you two's 'friendship' is just a little lie that would never work on me.
In the darkness I hide trying to listen what you say.
But the things I heard were better not heard at all
But I really really had to know yes I really did
I could feel the pain in your voices
Each word you muttered with a soft pain
But inside the pain I could also feel the rage...the anger too
Don't try to hide anything from me cause most the time I already know
But this time...I'm gonna have that last word...the one who's gonna end it this is me...I don't know how but instead of letting this battle go on forever...I'm gonna have the last word this time…I don’t care what your gonna say! As long as you say it…before me…
Author notes
-_- So help me i'm gonna have the last words this time
A contest entry
- Are you a lover or a fighter? by Jamaica.
600 points, ended July 30, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm so gonna have the last few words this time
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Wow I love this piece. It is so full of emotion and flows very well.
"I could feel the pain in your voices
Each word you muttered with a soft pain" I love those lines.. I can almost hear them arguing. It is so real. Amazing write!
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Still vry sad tho
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 awesome!!
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YAY go maddie you say those words.. lol... I feel sorry for you....
I hope everything will turn out ok!
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poor maddie.....
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I don't want to be part of this anymore
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when i referred to two people did you really think i was referring to you and drew? I wasnt, they know who they are...and it's not you...did you really throw away your knife?! *hugs* yay...
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yesi did
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I threw my knife Away I had to
No more suicide for me
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if u want the last word go ahead u can say it i wont stop u my lov
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maddie im sorry...i..am srry......i lov u <3
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