Heart of glowing embers,
stirs my soul this night.
As the beauty of her flesh,
sparkles by candlelight.
Soft and subtle, the glow,
of her loving eyes.
The wonders of her curves,
on the bed where she lies.
The tingle of the perfect touch,
magnifies the perpetual moment.
Releasing all the pure raw emotion,
that has forever slept dormant.
Just one little warm kiss,
triggers such passion and desire.
And the passion burns with heat,
in our trembling hearts of fire.
Skin touching skin combined,
with the tangles of ecstasy.
And our minds are all consumed,
by the perfect elasticity.
Electrified motions of bodies,
Wrapped in pure delight.
Lost is all time and space,
in the glow of inner light.
A contest entry
- kamasutra by Godless But Divine.
650 points, ended March 13, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely
I love the way your words play on the senses of your readers...tis a good thing. You also painted a picture with your words by using different adjectives that portray the act of the moment. Your last two lines:
Lost is all time and space,
in the glow of inner light
Those were truly beautiful and describe clearly the act of love...
Best of luck in the contest!
Concrete Angel
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UNDONE
Sparkling eyes, reflects desire
The touch of the skin lit burning fire
Lusty thoughts, ran like blood in veins
Caressing kisses on breast fell like rain
The sweat then slid, like the child slide for fun
Heat increased, volcanoes breathed, furious love were undone.
Nicely penned..goodluck.
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