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Natural Love~

Fountains spring forth, a slight skip before fall
Piano keys dance, where angels do play
Whispers on wind, violins fret no flaw
Enraptured by love songs, I shall not stray  

Rivers splash dry land, heat-waves taste blue seas
Hues arch after raindrops, bridges of bright
Kisses of sun-rays, grace the you in me
Rest in two heartbeats, our love is forthright

Mountains speak volumes, of our earthly song
As angels welcome, bonds forevermore
Like the dew of dawn, we'll both grow wings strong

As we soar above, sweet sovereign shores

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Inspired By Contest Poem: Mirrored Emotions
By: Looneyeclipse
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2079287

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  • PerfectImperfection
    March 24, 2008

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    *sigh* This is such a very beautiful piece! So wonderfully vivid and detailed in the thoughts of the heart. You weave such brilliance within the imagery - a great depth of adoration and devotion. Just lovely!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Rivers splash dry land, heat-waves taste blue seas

    brought out a weakness in me
    i like to be feed something different just that line o crap the whole paragraph swept me right off my feet

    thanks for sharing hon


  • Stardust-luvr
    March 17, 2008
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    congrats sweetheart on the well earned medal and honors xxxx superb penning indeed !!! xoxox


  • Randomly Beautiful
    March 12, 2008

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    Love at it's best indeed. Nice take on the prompt for the contest. You had some great imagery as well. Best wishes and I hope that you have been well.


  • sheltered
    March 11, 2008
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    Romantic, light, airy; with some tight imagery to hold it all together.


  • Sacred Ground
    March 11, 2008

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    This write is beautiful, Tim. A sweet symphony you have composed... Your love poems are the best!
    Lisa Marie
    ~I~D~

  • Mysterious Woman
    March 11, 2008

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    Wow... lol very romantic and intriguing... i can close my eyes and imagine all this happenning, and feel the warmth that it brings. =) Great write


  • Periwinkle Blue
    March 11, 2008

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    Beautiful imagery surrounds the reader with happy feelings... Your poem is splendidly thought and penned.


  • penman gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very powerful expression so full of love's beauty. Many blessings in the contest.


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    Tim this is love at it's best,
    you have sure mirrored the image of it.
    very romantic ans emotive i wish my love could write this for me. i liked it all but favour these words...

    " grace the you in me
    Rest in two heartbeats, our love is forthright"

    Aweee i am melting.
    Slán
    Dolores xx


  • broken-princess
    March 10, 2008
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    really good poem you have keep up your talent
    nessa


  • creationsfromheart
    March 10, 2008

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    This is excellent I would wish you luck in the contest however I do not think you will be needing it this is just fantastic!


  • Ithica silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful poem! Oh what a high when on the wings of love you fly! Very nicely written! (a minor adjusment and a couplet shy of a full fledged Sonnet, hehe!)


  • raggyann
    March 9, 2008

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    this is beautiful
    love and images
    i like it all
    no lines better than any other
    i love it just like you wrote it
    great luck in this copntest


  • Wandika gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Well done!

    Good rhyme, rhythm and continuity. Just a very nice poem Timothy!
    Hope you are doing well.

    Jim


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    Awesome work as always Tim!
    I love the imagery and emotions
    in this write. Well done bro
    and all the best to you in this
    contest. Thanks for sending it my way!




    Jeremy0826


  • Maureen silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    Beautiful poem, Timothy! Very nicely done!



    Much Love,
    <3 Maureen


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    March 9, 2008

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    You paint such rich portraits of wonderful feelings and emotion...I adore each line of course..smiles
    Beautiful write my dear brother, best wishes with this wonderful entry...
    Many blessings
    Sister ~A~

  • Stardust-luvr
    March 9, 2008

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    wow you have woven pureness of natural love in trueness of the heart - the beauty of your passion and wonderment only in my life exists only in dreamsof my mind. love you bunches xoxoxoxo many blessings always and more xxx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    this is beautiful. you always write so profoundly with such strong thoughts and words. its beautiful i love this


  • Rheea gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    ah ha this is more like it..like a song


  • aura
    March 9, 2008
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    lovely write of love!


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Bro, this is beautifully woven with thoughts of love...I am so happy that you were inspired by Tim's gorgeous poem to create another lovely poem to share with us all!

    Lynda


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    aaah Tim this is so pretty you weavered it perfectly with her poem inspiration, the love that glows always shows anyplace...good job..
    Moons

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