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Didn't Make it in Time





dying
decay sets in
a shell of former self
poisonous love defeated me
no cure



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a cinquain

prompt is antidote

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    oh just wow you have penned so deeply and inspirational from the prompt.captured it in such a unique way well done hun