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Siren sings; her alabaster locks
flowing, in chilly breeze;
Blossoming ivies entwirl the strings
even as the chords wake magic.

Nimbus awaits; gathering storm
of one thousand lost souls approaching;
Music, from wombs of long broken hearts
allure, in mystical whispers.

She sighs, like angel of captured breath
inside each washed up ocean shell;
her sorrowful chant of enduring love
chorused, in shattering wavelets.

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 11
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    Wow

    I love the word choice and flow to this. The imagery is gorgeous.


  • creationsfromheart
    March 9, 2008
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    this is pretty and I love the imagery Good luck in this contest


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    WOW!
    this is so amazing and absoultly beautiful, wodnerful write and good luck in the contest!
    take care

    stephanie =)