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Broken


What is the cure,
for broken love?
How can you mend,
my shattered heart?
Why should I try,
only to lose again?
What would be left,
of this broken man?




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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Does make us wonder why we try at all doesn't it, beautifully done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • penman gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.