The poison of loneliness,
illness of a broken heart,
there is one antidote
ensuring I’ll not fall apart:
the remedy I crave is true;
the cure I need is you.
©2008
3-9-08
Author notes
Written for the contest: Word Prompt 3 by Poetic Whisperer
Your prompt is: Antidote
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2394969?notheme=1
A contest entry
- Word Prompt 3 by Seeking Peace.
550 points, ended March 9, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited
Comments
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Sigh, I know this one too well right now, this is a beautifully sad take on the prompt,well done
Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck
Karen -
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Thank you for your kind comment and consideration.
rous
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