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My compass

You took out the poison,
Just in time.

The paper is peeling from my walls
Come kiss it back into place.

Put your hands on my hips
And direct me
Out of the room
That so holds my fate.

Point me in the right direction.

My compass

My light

My love

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Yuck.

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    not yuck...what you yucking about? i thought it was great. its obviously personal....but i enjoyed reading it.