A Vampyre Lust rushes through me
Whenever you look my way.
Infecting me with a power
That could stop both night and day.
You watch me through the shadows
Your eyes stained with Vampyre Lust.
We passionately kiss in a moment
That turns all time to dust.
A timeless kiss from your blood red lips
Sent shock waves deep to my heart.
Our emotions so raw and so wild
Has un-shackled our love to re-start.
Picture copyright : Vampires Lust by ChristinaDeath
Author notes
Inspired by my Guardian Angel - Lost Vampyre Angel
In a list
A contest entry
- Love, love, all sorts of love!! by PrInCeSsOfRoCk.
950 points, ended March 10, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark (again) loss by Selene Tremere.
400 points, ended March 31, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampires!!! Write Something on vampires PW by ShiningNShadows.
600 points, ended December 19, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good job! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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dark and sensual, love it.
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This is realy good I like your style you did an excellent job with this.
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Wonderful write. Congratulations...Well deserved Silver!
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ooh.. very heated.. steamy..lol. I like it... Dark but very sexy
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I like the way you worked the cliche in, without making it too cliche, if that makes sense. You made it tasteful and beautiful, while reminding us how creepy really the kiss of the creaturs of the night truly can be.
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this is amazing! really nice write thanks for entering and best of luck!
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wonderful write... especially with vamps in it lol love it thanks for posting it here! and good luck in the contest!
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Nice lips, how did she do that I wonder. ARe they both vamps, or is one a human
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Lustful indeed...
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i like it!! i was doubtful when i saw the title but heck it was great! i felt the passion and lust in it. thanks for entering
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Wow...You've got some wicked guardian angel there Del. Lol!
Nice to see a bit of lusty fire from you here. Well done!...alby
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oops forgot these
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Ooohh thank you xx forgetting those lol xx Am so glad you enjoyed it hun xx
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aww this is beatuiful,
thank you so much,
your a really great poet,
keep writing,
love kitty xxx
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