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Remedies

When the buffer backfires
to knock your desires.
Take a baby step to
to move to a new depth

to give your ship a easy

crossing.

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antidote 30 words or less

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    Interesting spin on the prompt given to inspire poets in this contest. Less than 30 words - right on. Liked the alliteration in buffer backfires.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    This is a great take on the prompt, nicely taken outside the box, well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    A unique take from this prompt, yet I can totally see where you are coming from too.
    Past and then into the present and the lines of the future yet to unfold
    Well done hun
    Julie x