Lovely tasty ice cream
Melts in the mouth
May it be scoops or
May it be a cone
Its still tasty
The reason I love it
Is because its so nice
Its like a cloud with chocolate chip
Or hot chocolate fudge
Its so yummy I even eat it
A bit in winter
Cause its so tasty
I cant help it
I absolutely love
The lovely lovely
Ice cream!
But then I get a sore throat
And my mom gets mad
And away goes the ice cream
I LOVE ICE CREAM!
A contest entry
- Ages 14 AND UNDER: Your Favorite Food by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended March 17, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please give me your honest opinion,I dont mind a hard comment
Comments
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i scream, you scream
i love ice cream 2. no hard comment; you done a good job!!!!!!! here's a poem i wrote about ice cream!!!! http://allpoetry.com/poem/4361759
-slick99
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No hard comments here, you write with joy and leave the reader happy. I like the line where you compare ice cream to a cloud, good idea! Best wishes in the contest!
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Mmmmmm you got that right! Ice cream is the yummiest food in the world, I think. You certainly have good taste. Thanks for sharing this and entering my contest. Good luck.
Brian
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