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United By Love

 

 

 

 

 

Destiny brought these two young hearts together.

From halfway around the world they ventured,

to finally embrace each other for the very first time.

Their romance was like that of a fairytale.

Everyday they found so much to love about one another.

 

He adored everything about her from head to toe.

The way that her hair fell across her face,

beautiful blue eyes that sparkled with each look.

The shape of her mouth and tender lips,

every freckle that graced her delicate face.

 

She loved his masculinity and proper ways.

The way that he walked slowly beside her,

all the while holding her hand in his.

She felt a sense of security and trust,

something that she rarely received from other men.

 

He always made sure that she came first in his heart.

There was nothing that anyone could ever say,

to sway his mind and tear him away from her side.

It was so easy to see how much he cared for her,

and how supportive he really was.

 

You could look into their eyes and in an instant,

feel the passion and commitment that they shared.

It is something that I think we all search for.

Contentment and the ability to follow through in a relationship,

can be very difficult as we live our lives each day.

 

With every beat of his heart he made sure,

that she was always happy and sated.

He worked hard to give her only the very best in life.

Every morning butterfly kisses and sweet I love you's,

were left lovingly upon his cheek.

 

Waking up to the smell of her sweet perfume,

and finding her red lipstick marks all over his forehead.

He smiled happily as tears cascaded down his face.

He closed his eyes and kneeled down to the floor,

thanking God for the wonderful gift of her love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Falling in love is such a wonderful thing for each and every one of us. Especially, when you find someone that you have searched and waited for all of your life. It's amazing when two people come together after a long distance relationship especially one that began as a letter, find that they are inseperable. I think that this is something that we all search for in our lives and one that very few of us get to experience.

God bless you all and I hope that this poem finds you in the best of health! Thanks a lot for taking the time to read this one!

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  • Nighttime angel
    March 14, 2008

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    this is absolutely beautiful in every way possible. its something you are right that everyone hope to achieve in their lives. at some point. whether its destiny or not.. superb job on this.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    This touched me deeply...
    Especially this verse:

    "Waking up to the smell of her sweet perfume,

    and finding her red lipstick marks all over his forehead.

    He smiled happily as tears cascaded down his face.

    He closed his eyes and kneeled down to the floor,

    thanking God for the wonderful gift of her love."

    Such sensitivity and emotion in this romance you speak of!
    Beautifully done!

    Lynda