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For Now...

The wind carries a difficult tune
notes born amongst autumn’s weak
in a whirlwind gathers
tired leaves barely breathing

Rise above naked trees
remembers springtime rains
dripping diamonds
shading eyes on summer trips
glued to magical pages

Bodies cut in sweet abandon
lover’s hearts withstand every season
winter’s  melody, perched on icy  cleft
no robin’s breast to  hold its song
exhales in chilling white

Autumn‘s weak, under fallow tomb
snow angels and sled tracks its epitaph
rest for now under blanket of cold
wait for shade from up above

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  • poet2angels gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    This is beautiful...
    Such wonderous imagery in every line!
    TY for entering

    Lynda


  • oldschooldee1
    March 9, 2008
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    love this last line...great write