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Look Within and You Will Find

 

 

Softly playing constantly in my poetic mind

Are sensual refrains of the most ardent kind

 

With rhythm and beat aptly moving my soul

It is this romantic fervor that I desire to extol

 

So come with me won’t you, and dance away

On this wholly passionate and stirring foray

 

I promise you will not be let down in the least

As my erotic disposition will fill with its feast

 

So join me won’t you please and take my hand

For I’ll show you pleasure you can hardly stand.

 

 

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    April 4

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    Bravo Bravo!! this was just beyond beautiful.. The flow in your words just sooths the soul , and how beautiful the image that you bring to mind... You are a master of words.. And sensuality of course..
    Great write.
    Peace to you, Jetleena
  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 9

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    oh daddy you know you always amaze me. your words speak so softly yet with such a beautiful and sensual feel to it. well done


  • Margaret Denham
    March 9

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    An invitation within an invocation? Or should I have put that the other way around? A very nice expression of yourself. Best wishes in the contest.




  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 9

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    *GULP*
    Think you'll get lots of women extending their hands after this write!!!

    So very true also hun... for your sensual and erotic writes are surely a feast for the eyes and senses!

    Keep them coming!