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[ As the storm rides in.... ]

As the storm rides in....


The thunder rolls
My mind is lost

The wind, it blows
Away within it I'm roughly tossed

The rain pours down
Like a shower of pain

Then hail flashed before my eyes
An urge to cry and scream again

Lightning stikes
The heavy wind blows

Hitting the walls around me
Every whistle
Every echo

But..

Every rain drop a tear
Mixed of happiness, sadness, loneliness

As it falls caressing me
Every inch of my body
As if in his arms

As the storm rolls in

My emotions crash
Like the screaming of the thunder.
Flashing of the lightning.
Moanings cries of the wind.
Hail that crushes me within.

A storm of my emotions.
From every point of view.
This pain here from within me.

A fear of the storm
I do.

Thunder rumbles
Lightning strikes
Wind moans
Rain falls

All around me

Lost, in the storm or rage

With a simple thought
It' is all gone.

They sky is clear.

The wind slows.

With the last drop of rain falls a rainbow.

To my feet
The question shall be

Do I dare to cross?
Do I step up?

Do I follow this set path?

Or shall the storm arise again.


The black clouds roll up behind me.
Slight moan in the breeze picking up.
Drops tapping my nose.
Thunder booming in my heart beat

An lightning stikes as my heart stops.

The storm is gone now

The sun sneaks past the black cloud above.
A white powder, beautiful dove.
What I found within my self.
Fought through the storm.
I was left with no more than a rainbow, it was your love.


~Carousel
"When you walk through a storm
Hold your chin up high
And don't be afraid of the dark.
At the end of a storm
Is a golden sky
And the sweet, silver song of a lark.

Walk on, through the wind,
Walk on, through the rain,
Though your dreams be tossed and blown.
Walk on, walk on with hope in your heart,
And you'll never walk alone,
You'll never walk alone."

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  • Rendered Old
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow...
    Mini epic
    Some very interesting imagery there.. The storm interacting with you physically.. the emotions involved.. very impressive

    And then the ending.. the epic part :Well done, my darling