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Stranger

Lovers doubt our word
with absent proof

They pass us by
far more familiar with concrete than faces

And this world always tends
to leave us
A stranger among friends.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    So deeply profound and sincerely expressive... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.


  • Stardust-luvr
    March 9, 2008

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    well done and so very true left in the shadows to pick up the broken pieces of the heart alone. many blessings always xxx