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Rich in the Real

Rich in the real
Fertile to feel
Spine a sacred steeple
Roads of flesh and pain,
lead to true pleasure again
The hanged man smiled on his cross
Without honesty everything would be lost
The real is something you must feel
You must feel
It's something you cannot appeal
My mind wonders way past my will,
and without her I wonder into pain again
The mad man my only friend, again
So not zen
So you must feel
Rich in the real
Pain, guts and fear
Hands holding brimstone and tear

God is in your scream

God is in your cry

God is in your heart

God is the sky

Learn to love to ask the question, why?
Count backwards from ten,
then give it a try.
To be rich in the real,
You must feel
Endlessly into the abyss
Meet your maker and kiss
Hands holding hazel
Rich in the real
Fertile to feel
Spine a sacred steeple
Roads of flesh and pain,
lead to true pleasure again





















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  • I will stand by you
    April 23, 2008
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    great write. Keep it up.


  • Krystal Lynn13
    April 23, 2008
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    pretty good. i like it a lot. Learn to love to ask the question, why?
    Count backwards from ten,
    then give it a try.
    To be rich in the real,
    You must feel
    Endlessly into the abyss
    Meet your maker and kiss
    Hands holding hazel
    Rich in the real
    Fertile to feel
    i like that part the best


  • Lotus-Mama
    April 23, 2008

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    Wow. Im speechless. This is amazing, deep, fast, boom! And there it is. Great one... speechless.....


  • TrulyAnAngel
    April 23, 2008

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    "The mad man my only friend, again"
    Powerful Journey..!
    Perfect flow entirely through...Great Pen
    Angel


  • Lowell Poe
    March 12, 2008

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    CHRIST!
    YOU ARE AMAZING.
    This has SO much!
    Unbelievable, pounding, thunderous rhythm.
    Such a right now piece.
    Feel it, I love it!
    This is just.......

    The hangman smiled on his cross
    without honesty everything would be lost.

    To me being a musician, I don't know if your such a good writer that you planted this in the readers head but,
    this was just really workin for me.
    You know I think your a funominal writer..BUT THIS...
    I really dig this,
    In my humble and honest opinion, you are a unique talent and this is poetry in it's highest form.


    MANY MANY BLESSING MY SISTER
    LOWELL POE.


  • Breathing-Fate
    March 11, 2008
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    Powerful

    So true and amazing! I'm speechless! Best blessings
    -Fate-


  • Swamp Thing
    March 10, 2008

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    Very good

    This was a very good and powerful piece. Vivid imagery and what I might call a traditional abstract style that worked very well for this poem. You did a nice job with this write and did very well at getting the message of the poem to the reader.

  • luvdrkchocolate
    March 9, 2008

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    Oh. This is another interesting poem by you. I know I've read stuff of yours before that was in the featured box. I absolutely love the planet side picture. It kind of made your poem feel less real though. lol I think because my mind fell off into space somewhere. It was a good trip though.


  • quantumsurveyor
    March 9, 2008

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    Guess this must mean more to the writer than to this reader, not sure what is being developed as the poem moves forward, my loss probably


  • XxTwigxX
    March 9, 2008
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    This makes my mind think a little bit...
    Enjoying to read, keep it up.

    XxTwigxX

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