I am here
but not seen.
They have ears
bt I'm not heard.
Looking through
but not at me.
Belonging to another world,
caught on the outside looking in.
Author notes
prompt- stanger among frinds
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- PIF ~ 15 poets ~ 30 words by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended March 9, 2008, 11 entries
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Wow this a outstanding poem that you have written. this is something that I can relate to. I have felt like this many times in my life and its not a nice feeling at that.
thank you for entering & good luck
kat
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It happens to all of us at one point of time!!! this poem depicts the reality of human life...I like this!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri...
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Think we all go through this at some time in our lives, not seeming to fit in. OFt times I think it is for the better, as the groups we want to belong to sometimes does things that we do not approve of, or wants us to do those things too. Sentiments well expressed in these lines - check last line of first verse - but.
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I'm sure there are many of us that can relate to this great write. I tend to beleive that outsiders can see the bigger picture and have a more balanced approach to the world on which they are looking to.
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I can certainly relate to these words... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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