I stayed long enough to wear your hands
around every breath I took
so you drew me a map
with twisted emotions
and cast me out to bleed.
I took up space
on your ocean of charted demise
so you made me a room of my own...
Author notes
picture credited to ~ vampirella87 at deviantart
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Quickie by Nighttime angel.
430 points, ended March 9, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Worthy of Gold by Virgoan.
900 points, ended April 17, 2008, 73 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have a way with them last lines.
Love it. 
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What depth of emotions i felt as I read your lines. Brilliant take on the prompt picture. Your imagery paints such a powerful situation of emotions. Congratulations on the HM ...Very nicely penned.
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you really take the picture to a great new level with your words. its really intense,and very aswome.
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wow this is so intense.. I love your take on the prompt. excellent job with the poem.. excellent.
good luck
kat
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Wow....great take on the prompt...you are very good at these shorter poems....well done..
Rob
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