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lock the door

Nothing matters anymore
I've turned away and locked the door
I've turned the key and closed my eyes
Let spill the tears and stop the lies

I want no more to do with this place
I want to leave without a trace
To pack my bags and disappear
To have no regret to have no fear

To abandon all my life long dreams
To stop the nighttime nightmare screams
To leave behind the pain and despair
To move on with existence without a care

If only this could all be true
To go away and start anew
But I must live with these tears and lies
So I'll lock the door and close my eyes.

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  • Dark Magician
    March 13, 2008

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    kewlness

    This was amazing!!! I love the emotion you put out in this. The feelings are raw, and you tell us perfectly what you're going through in this. It had great flow and rhythm. Great write and Great job!!!

  • Swords in Ice
    March 9, 2008
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    Deep

    The 3 stages of a problem - dealing with it, upon failing that, hiding from it, upon failing that, Starting anew.

    The key is rusty, be sure not to lock doors too often or the key will break in the lock. Be sure of yourself when you use that fragile key to ward away problems. Be sure that you are doing it for the correct purpose.

    Take care hun x