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wheres my love?

Will I ever find my one true love?
Do you believe there is such?
I've reached out on a long search
But never close enough to touch
Couldn't find anyone to hold me
Lost in nothing but my dreams
Everyone I loved was false
I said screw my self-esteem

Is love just something you say
To get what you want
Because real love is fake
You say the three words
So that you can come and take
Whatever you want

All I ever wanted was someone
To tell me he would be there
To have that special feeling
But no one ever seemed to care
It disgusts me that my one man
Never came to cure my loathing
It's over now no one to stop me
Watch my dead limp body floating

Is love just something you say
To get what you want
Because real love is fake
You say the three words
So that you can come and take
Whatever you want

A fisherman finds and pulls it in
Still blood red from dripping wounds
Watch me on the ten o'clock news
Maybe my love will find me soon

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  • Dark Magician
    March 13

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    kewlness

    I absolutely loved this!!! It was full of your feelings of not being able to find the one person that you could truly love. Then in this quest full of pain you end up giving on it. This was so raw. Great write and Great job!!!