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Magnetic Sway

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Full, violent curves of desire betray previous conquest
as hazel deep stares capture next victim in her web.
Tendrils of her net flutter gently to hypnotise
and in gossamer threads of entrapment the lure is cast once more.
Ignoring scents of her past lover's touch
the net spreads wide until finally hooks gouge into the soul.
Held mesmerised within her gaze she will grind next sacrifice to her will,
for there is no escape from these waves of beguile that will always fascinate and seduce all drawn to her magnetism.

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Picture is from
http://www.fortunecity.com/rivendell/stonekeep/434/bvallejo/bv1.html

credit artist: Boris Vallejo

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  • Iris Doyle
    January 3
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    beautifully written. i loved this.


  • thepoetssoul
    March 9, 2008

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    Oh my...
    This is a wonderful penning to the prompt.
    The imagery and wording is splendid
    I really like the direction you took this one
    Thanks for sharing and best of wishes to you.

    Tony


  • penman gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • FransB gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    You have related in word to this 'painting' well - I can even feel my discomfort. Will not be sending her an invitation to my next party!! [see preavious, it should be previous]. Good luck. Frans