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Letter to Mom (1)

Hey mom,
how's the weather in heaven?
Does it snow alot,
or is it snowy all the time?
I sure hope you got to build a snowman,
ooo or have a snowball fight with your mom.

Do you get to hang out with Jesus.
does he give you lots of hugs?
I hope he shows you lots of love,
I know I would if I could.
Mommy I miss you so much it hurts,
I wish I could tell you I love you again.

I'm gonna try to be a super good girl,
I can't wait to see you again.
I wish you could meet Andrew,
You'd love him!
He's amazing and kind,
you will have grand kids promised!

I love you!
xoxo

Chrissy

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  • Bob Fox
    September 6, 2008

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    No words

    As an older man . Now way past my prime. And one that lost both nparents at a younger age I only can say that the heart always aches. BUt there in heaven awaits your mom to hold her beautiful daughter once again.


  • JinSays gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    I just had to put my mother in a hospital today. This touches me. She's very sick, and she needs help, and I didn't know what else to do.
    I'm so sorry you lost your mom, Chrissy. Life is so hard with them, and without them, it's empty. My mom is there, but she's not there, does that make sense? So yeah, I understand the bitterness. My mom is waiting on Jesus too. Her bags are packed. I live 2000 miles away. She won't come here. It's like she is in heaven.
    hugs to you darlin. I'm sorry she's gone. I'm glad you're still trying to get it all out. You are an incredible writer. So sensitive. Blessings,
    Jin


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    April 9, 2008

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    Beautiful

    * cries * Oh My Gosh this was such a sweet innocent tender poem about innocent love from a child who misses her mommy that much. this really hit me hard & I am a guy who rarily shows his emotions. this was just oh so very beautifully penned & I really love that you posted this for us all to read & admire the fact that you made such a promise to your mommy. beautiful work & I will happily give you 3 clappys because this was just to sweet! P.S. where in Washington State ya from? I live outside of Tacoma here


    • ChrissyJean
      April 10, 2008
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      Thank you so much. I live in Puyallup but I'm moving to Federal Way


  • individuality gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    a good poem and i like the fact you did not take this dark which you could have but kept it smiling and happy


  • Kelli Marie
    April 9, 2008

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    This is very endearing. Has a childish tint to it. I can feel the innocent love throughout it. Very nice. One thing to always remember... A lot is two words...
    Kelli


  • Angel Wings1960
    April 9, 2008
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    Very nice letter to your mom. I am sure she read it. This was very touching.


  • endless-lover silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    I like how it was as if you were chating with your mom
    this was sad though it made me think of my dad a lot
    none the less a great write keep it up doll.

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