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You are a mystery,
Never a whispered mystery, rather a mystery sung by the roaring chorus of choirs
Bellowed by the rampant tempest and illuminated by the bonfires of love, loss, and passion

You are a painting
Never composed of ideas, rather light and shadow, silence and noise
Celestial faces and coarse hands

You are a well
A vast cauldron where hope and fear, dedication and impulse,
are burned together

You are a pier
Forever dark, sensual, and profoundly moving
The origin where man and nature, man and God, and man and man collide

You are a torrent
Destined to surge away
Before the world pollutes its feral perfection

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  • hemingway
    February 16
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    I really liked this one

    You have a wonderful spirit

  • loca elmo
    February 9
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    I JUST LOVED IT


  • Ang
    May 15, 2008
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    I always enjoy writting, it's just so unique and always inspirational. this one is just so beautiful! Congrats on the trophy you def deserved it


  • perfectsunset gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    A dark, yet beautiful write. Very intriguing, mystic & original. Loved these lines

    "You are a mystery,
    Never a whispered mystery, rather a mystery sung by the roaring chorus of choirs
    Bellowed by the rampant tempest and illuminated by the bonfires of love, loss, and passion"

    Really good use of vocabulary and visuals in this.

    Thanks for entering my contest & best of luck to you

  • MightyBoosh
    March 17, 2008
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    I loved it, it was lovely
    x


  • Poetryintheblood silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    Now this is beautiful, and so eloquent too, just took me away which is the whole contest idea, thank you for entering, and good luck, Josie

  • Harmesmur
    March 9, 2008

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    YOU are fantastic. Your eloquence is astounding. There isn't a single word without meaning, without beauty, I love this.


    • Mojave Moon
      March 9, 2008
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      Wow! Thanks for such a nice comment, glad someone liked it because it took way too long to write Thank you again!
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