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Summer


             
                  The summer sun rises fast
                  It blows the night away
                  Brings color to the flowers
                  And brightens their display.

                  It dries the grass out in the field
                  That was, in spring, so green.
                  But we all enjoy the summer,
                  Its the way its always been.

                  Summer is a time for fun,
                  For travel or holidays,
                  Or to just stay at home,
                  Relaxed in a dreamy haze.

                  We love all our summers,
                  We're getting old, you see
                  And summer gives us warm daylight
                  To do just what we please.

We now bid farewell to summer - autumn is here

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 26, 2008
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    Autumn is not here lol SPRING oh wait your in another country This is a lovely write I like your imagery Dear.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    Well done can't wait for summer to come Excellent imagery
    second stanza sec line comma needs spaced
    also last stanza 2nd line


    • rbruce gold member
      March 9, 2008
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      Hi Red, We are just leaving summer. Right now its dry and dusty again. Thank you for you encourageing comments. I'll fix my typo's, thanks again.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Aww lovely poem.. enjoying the warmth of summer...

    Well.. unless you're me who prefers the cold Yep, I'm weird.. lol

    Sweet poem hun!


    • rbruce gold member
      March 9, 2008
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      Jackie you are not weird. Some like it hot, others , not. Me I am at the time of life where I want it in between all the time. Thank you for reading my poetry and commenting on it. I appreciate that.

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