The summer sun rises fast
It blows the night away
Brings color to the flowers
And brightens their display.
It dries the grass out in the field
That was, in spring, so green.
But we all enjoy the summer,
Its the way its always been.
Summer is a time for fun,
For travel or holidays,
Or to just stay at home,
Relaxed in a dreamy haze.
We love all our summers,
We're getting old, you see
And summer gives us warm daylight
To do just what we please.
We now bid farewell to summer - autumn is here
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Autumn is not here lol SPRING oh wait your in another country This is a lovely write I like your imagery Dear.
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Well done can't wait for summer to come Excellent imagery
second stanza sec line comma needs spaced
also last stanza 2nd line

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Hi Red, We are just leaving summer. Right now its dry and dusty again. Thank you for you encourageing comments. I'll fix my typo's, thanks again.
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Aww lovely poem.. enjoying the warmth of summer...
Well.. unless you're me who prefers the cold
Yep, I'm weird.. lol
Sweet poem hun!


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Jackie you are not weird. Some like it hot, others , not. Me I am at the time of life where I want it in between all the time. Thank you for reading my poetry and commenting on it. I appreciate that.
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