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No Chance For Help

When you really need help
the ones who cant help
are the ones who really try.

The ones that say they will
always be there are the ones
that lie.

So what do you do
when it comes to this
feel lost and alone.

Nobody to turn to
dont even feel wanted at home
having to fight back the tears.

I will show them that.
I dont need anyone.
I can do it on my own.

Because there is no chance for help.

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Just how I was feeling

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  • Gabrielle28
    November 6, 2008
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    Deep. There are those who can help. We are just hard to find. Great job.


  • Falcon SilverWolf
    March 13, 2008

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    There is a chance you will see
    the light that some one will lend
    a loving embrace to hold you
    so that you can truely mend

    A helping hand to held you stand
    and wipe away your lonley tears
    You will find a true friends soon
    so never give up hope


    Great poem full of emotion i loved it.


  • L. J. Arien
    March 12, 2008
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    When you really need help
    the ones who cant help
    are the ones who really try.


  • Shade Aurelia
    March 9, 2008

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    friends can be wicked things, most times, caring about nought but themselves and such. i only hope you find someone you can turn to...someone who will be good for you.


    Shade


    • CountCrimsonAvarus gold member
      March 10, 2008
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      Its just the ones that you though you could always depend on when the time comes they are to worried about other things to even give your problem a second thought. Keith is still doing all he can but, hes not who needs to be helping hes not my parents or anything like that though sometimes I think of him more as a Dad to me sort of most of the time not but when he does stuff like this thats how it feels my best friend is my Dad. I dont know its just hard to deal with. Mainly my whole family is mad that I got tattoos and thats the problem and they just cant deal with it.


      • Irrylath Bloodbane
        March 11, 2008

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        Then why listen to them, uncle? Your family don't live in your body and therefore they shouldn't bring you down for a trifle like that. Shade and I happen to like your markings now.

        Irrylath


  • Alth3a
    March 8, 2008

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    i know how it feels:'(

    good poem.. .. .. i completely know how you feel even sometimes i cant turn to my friends for help and the ones i can arrn't there .. ... keep uop the gd work

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