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I Never Told You

Ice in my hot tea
melted away
while I pretended to chill

while I wished you well with her
- each time you changed your mind

Honesty
fell from honest eyes

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 9, 2008

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    OH my. This is really quite beautiful. I loved the last two lines. Good to see a beautiful shiny bauble adorning this write. Well done. Congratulations. ~Pamela


  • Cannonsfire
    March 9, 2008
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    Lovely job, thank you


  • Jfd
    March 8, 2008

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    this blew me away, I loved it! the first stanza is great...this is unique and fresh.....very enjoyable =)