Whole wheat or white
rye bread's the most
sandwich or bun
please make mine with toast.
For breakfast it's great
with eggs & meat
buttered & sliced
it's a morning treat!
For lunch it's just fine
with tuna or roast
apple butter or honey
please make mine with toast.
Supper's amazing
with cream & dark roast
maple sugar & cinnamon
please make mine with toast!
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First impressons?
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ha ha ha wonderful! this is the perfect poem for me to read on a cool autumn evening. love the picture too. a pleasure to read. - NANGALEEMA
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This makes me crave a late night snack and I haven't done that in, on gee... far too long to remember. I guess you have stolen my resolve with your imagery and well chosen word. I lost my senses when I saw the line containing maple sugar and cinnamon. YUM!!!
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I just got up I think I just might have eggs and toast after reading this!
Or just cinnamon and sugar toast. Haven't had cinnamon and sugar toast in a loooooooooong time. Thanks for reminding me of it. Fun poem that makes the mouth water.
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Great Imagery
That made my mouth water. Haha. Brilliant flow and rhyme and WONDERFUL imagery. Hell, could even smell the bread, such was the power of this piece. Well done indeed. Very well done.
All the best
Wayne Leon
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Wonderful
Yes, let's have toast all day and night
May I add that this is a brilliant write!
"please make mine with toast!"
Bravo, I shall give you a toast
Wish you the best in the contest!
Peace
~David~
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ah ha, cute. all i can picture is some guy carrying a toaster around all day. great write.
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