Here forever in your arms,
that is where I'll stay.
I love you always,
and that will never change.
I know you didn't ask for this,
but now you love me too.
I know you wanted me to forget,
but neither of us can really do that.
Here forever in your arms,
that is where I'll stay.
I love you eternally,
and that will never change.
The chill of your skin,
is long since been lost.
It's so funny.
Sometimes, even after so long,
I still forget to breathe;
I even forget how to breathe.
I really can't explain
what you do to me.
I just know you understand,
because I do the same to you.
Here forever in your arms,
that is where I'll stay.
I love you forever,
and that will never change.
I get lost in your eyes,
even after all this time.
Some things will never change.
I understand why you are scared,
I feel it too.
But there is something,
something much more powerful,
driving me.
And that is my love for you.
Nothing eles matters to me.
Here forever in your arms
this is where I'm going to stay.
I love you right now,
always, eternally, and forever,
and that will never change.
Author notes
This is based off of how Bella feel about Edward. It was written from Bella's point of view and it was after Edward came back/Bella saved his sorry butt in New Moon. (Basically Eclipse really...) Hope you enjoyed this one. I loved writing it. ^.^
For another contest... It's an Eclipse/Twilight/New Moon poem. So yeah... Whatever option that one was. And my author name is Night-Owl.
Night-Owl
A contest entry
- Twilight [the novel] by Stephanie Meyer by ConvenientExcuses.
700 points, ended March 9, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ****&hearts:.GIMME YOUR BEST SILVER.:♥**** by Erika Elektrikka.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Dead is the New Alive~ OPTIONS CONTEST by Figg.
450 points, ended March 19, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment honestly please. But don't be rude. CONSTRUCTIVE CRISTISM is welcome. But don't bash me; I work hard.
Comments
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I love this! This a poem that describes Bella so well and is so true! Great job!
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I think this captures Bella's feelings so eloquently and perfectly. All the awe, and power of her love.... it's all just awesomely put into one poem. This poem rocks!
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I enjoyed this poem. I really liked the repetition of the first 4 lines. This was very nicely written, as the flow was nice, and the words were understandable. This was overall sweet. Thank you for your entry!
Good Luck,
Erika
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"Here forever in your arms
this is where I'm going to stay.
I love you right now,
always, eternally, and forever,
and that will never change."
I really like this piece. I love the books and you've captured Bella so well. great job! thanks for entering and good luck!
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