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guardian angel

guardian angel
watches over me does he
though i don't see him
feel his touch or hear his voice
his love encompasses me

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  • Swan song gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Very good thank you for etnering


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 9, 2008
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    A lovely piece, very well penned. Good luck in the contest


  • Candy6
    March 8, 2008
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    Very nice tanka. I love angels.


  • polly filla
    March 8, 2008

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    I like how you've incorporated the syllable count into your title I do that, as well...just to be tidy!