You say I'm your friend,
But I'm controlling, bossy
I treat you beneath me.
Why must I be treated like this?
All of this youknow isn't true.
I try to be your friend,
But you are always pulling away.
I can do better than this.
Why couldn't I see?
It's about time I figured it out.
When you are angry you childishly pout.
How could I be so blind?
You act as though nobody cares.
You say your life is in the dark.
I'm tired; I don't really care anymore.
I'm not your servant; go tell someone who cares.
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This isn't about anybody at all but anyone who has a problem friend can use this to express your feelings^_^
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People use their friends sometimes, it's a shame as it's just really mean. Sometimes people will play the card that you are doing something wrong, or that they have a real reason for acting that way, but often they don't.
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Ah, the angst of teens, I felt the same way once, until I jumped into the deep end of life, and suddenly those issues of younger years seemed not so important. Loved this dear.
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Very clear and smooth flowing... I love the simplicity of it - it feels like you're using the language you talk to yourself with... It's like peeking in on your inner conversations... Good write.
Ken
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beautifully written.. i wonder how you write on such subjects without any personal experience.. thanx for sharing..
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Oh my goodness... this hit me like a ton of bricks... my friend just did that to me, saying i was a horrible friend and that i didn't care and her life was so bad... wow, thanks for writing this, i never really wrote it down like that before. The only confusing part is the first stanza, i had to read that a couple times, then i moved on and it made sense later, but you might want to look at rewording that.
I am so glad you wrote this, it totally hits home and you wrote it so well.
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nice!
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