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Spring


The warmth of the sun
Is well received by my bones
The long cold winter
Is dark in so many ways
Springtime is well on it’s way



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  • Swan song gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Nice tanka with a goo dflow and postive tone to it. Well done and good luck.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Nice piece, so pleased it is getting warmer. All the best in the contest