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Hush

Hush now my baby
Don't cry a tear
Mommy will be waiting
For you right here

Hold you in my arms
Keeping you close
Mommy will always love you
Loving you most

Knowing that always
You'll be in my heart
Physical distance
Can't keep us apart

You're part of my living
You're all of my soul
Knowing your living
Is what makes me whole

You are my baby
A miracle, true
You are the air I breath
Baby, I love you

G-D will keep you safe
A deliverer you'll be
Soon you'll come back
And set us all free

I am your mother
I set you aflow
Tears are falling
As I'm letting you go

The river is raging
But G-D is with you
You'll have a new home
And you'll make it through...

Author notes

this is from the song "deleiver us"
Written November 30th, 2003

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  • Midian
    December 14, 2004
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    wow...now thats sad as it can get

  • Alissa Ann
    December 4, 2003
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    Eh? Question, what's with the G-D? Are you editing out 'God'? or something...that slightly confused me. Gah! Either way, great poem! Thanks for sharing it. It's really sad! Poor baby! *wipes away a tear* Thank for entering!! Keep it up! Sorry it took me so long to get around to commenting and judging, keep it up!!

    --YoungUnwanted