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Golden Fire

 

 

Gold flames dim afar
Eyes welcome a glint of dusk
Beauty as day fades

 

 

 

 

 

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  • demon bunny90
    June 18, 2008

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    wow, wicked write i can see the sunset, it almost makes me feel sad that it only lasts so long. it reminds me of a soul going to the other world as the sun sets.


  • Swan song gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Lovely haiku I enjoyed this read


  • Desire gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow~

    Beauty of a piece penned and lifts the Spirit to a whole new level
    Lovely~~

    Keep that quill dancing~~
    Wooooooooo Hoooooooooo
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Kelli Marie
    March 9, 2008
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    oopsy


  • Kelli Marie
    March 9, 2008

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    A beautifully written haiku. I enjoyed the read and the image your words allowed me to see. Good luck.
    Kelli


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    Wow a beautiful poem. Conveyed lovely imagery. very well penned indeed, good luck in the contest


  • Stardust-luvr
    March 8, 2008

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    super job hun as incredible sunsets are miraculious images to experience and you shone one beautifully with your words. many loving blessings always xxx

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