My heart found a love unbound
n’ ver knowing time draws near.
Golden sweet beats, love’s feats
growing weary of ebony fears.
Angelic songs of celestial crying;
left me lonesome people prying.
His sexy charm within my arms
upon beautiful memory hangs.
One heated kiss shared in the mist
ending darkness lost in pangs.
Ethereal stars grow dim then dark;
darling hear me with your heart.
All hearts have ears searching fears
anguish once swallowed me whole.
He’s heavens light on all my nights
sublimely he touches my soul.
My purple void turned vanilla mist;
lost in his embrace, lustful kiss.
Author notes
Thought: Your heart has ears.....
In a list
A contest entry
- Prewrite Amazingagorium! Almost Anything Goes. by wonderbandalice.
375 points, ended July 23, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing
This is an amazing piece of romantic poem replete with words that endears the reader to the theme from the very beginning to the end.Great use of visuals did help to make this poem appealing and revealing.
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Loved the flow and rhyme you have here
as this is a wonderful poem on love and you did
great in getting the silver with it.
Riftkin
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That was great! I love the rhyme scheme, and you did it so well! The concept is awesome, it flows really well, I love it!
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This is a stunning piece! I love the beauty that flows through each line. I especially loved "My purple void turned vanilla mist; lost in his embrace, lustful kiss." Just absoultly beautiful!
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That is lovely!!! I mean i read it twice before i was able to comment....so sweet and captivating are the words.Great write and keep it up!
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Hmm that is an ammusing thought. I like that last part of this, soacifically that purple void turned vanilla mist. for some reason that paints a pretti picture for me. like an vitory within, or something to that extent... Beautiful either way. great write, keep it up.
XxTwigxX
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Nice write, but doesn't really fall in the parameters of the contest for "sugared" (candy) imagery. Thank you for your entry.
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Wowza. What a poem! I will be reading this again.
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marinated in sensual i wish i could get soft like that
its comes out ever 80 damn poems i right
i bet i can only give you one sensual piece in me every often that is what i love about you and piffy yaul so sensual and shit i love this Mrs E good luck in the contest
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wow..
absolutely love your colorful ending..how unique..and never expected it..truly wonderful..
My purple void turned vanilla mist;
lost in his embrace, lustful kiss.
thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest..blessings.. namaste..
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