Hummingbirds vibrant
Flowers welcome their visit
Butterflies graceful
Roses red, yellow so bright
Gardens, a daily delight
A contest entry
- TANKA TIME by Swan song.
650 points, ended March 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice how you used alliteration and rhyme to spice this up.
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I thought the last two lines was very clever thank you for entering and well done
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Excellent
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I almost typed your name in this comment.
Such a perfectly penned piece of poetry my dear friend.
Best of luck to you in this contest.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us.
*S* Cynthia
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This is a lovely write.
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good last rhyme good images yes they are a daily delight thanks for sharing regards zaj
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Nice form, delightful imagery portrayed here. Good luck in the contest
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