Have you ever believed in evil?
Have you ever beloved an animal?
Would you ever take my cunt?
My gilded wet cunt?
This cunt is yearning, wanting
Your hands upon it.
Take those hands and let me
Suck the flesh from them
Let me feast upon them with wine
Let me gnaw on them with lust
For I fear your mind, your
Beautifully broken spirit
Because I WANT IT
I want to hurt it, fuck it
Kiss it, hold it and throw it
AWAY
Because it has the power I wish for
It has the power I wish to have
Your power I want inside me
Within me, fingering me
FUCKING ME
Author notes
Number two...another that doesn't rhyme
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I read it again...and it has turned me on...
I've got no option at the moment but to play with myself...
Help me hottie!
A wild erotica!
Galaxy2 -
Graphic
Hello there Hollie.
This poem is very graphic and direct but the way youhave crafted it makes it seem natural and so is a very effective way of writing.
I like the mixed messages in it - the longing, the desire and the sadness and fire.
Well done!
Have a gr8 Easter,
BJ.
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This is shockingly deep
This is naked with emotions that are raw. It talks of passion and hate. Anger and lust all in the same stanza's. The language is stark but, that gives it an animal feeling. It is like being a slave to two masters. Brilliantly written.
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Wow!...
It's so passionate...
so satiric...
and yet so wildly erotic...
Love, my dear!
Galaxy2
Girl! You're really someone special!
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