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She tries to call herself a poet but angst filled words are all that she can create



Are you listening yet?
Do you see the tears that dance on her cheeks?
Do you see her-
or just a distorted image of yourself?
Do you look in the mirror
&& not like what you see?
Then you're close to feeling just like me.

Filled with self loathing && disgust.
She's never gonna be okie.
Today is just a repeat of yesterday
&& three days ago will be just like tomorrow.

Broken hearts♥ bleed.
Like nothing before, she's just another
fuck up. Oh && She'd apologise for bleeding
on your skirt with her very last stolen
breathe. Take her away.

Steal her hopes and dreams.
Steal her heart♥.
Steal her tears.
Just don't expect her to be your everything.
&& don't pretend that you want her to be.
Don't lie. Don't sigh. Don't cry.
She's a sucker for sweet talkers &&
stolen sighs. She's nothing to dare for.

She confuses drama for hugs && kisses.
Yet, she wants to be nothing you want
&& everything you need. But you never will.
Because, when she's home alone, she just dances by herself.
You pull her hips && tug. on her strings.

If this list of words doesn't make sense
to you, then it never will.
She'd apologise but it's not her cause to care for.
After all, do you see her yet?
I didn't think so.

This wildcard girlie is the bound && broken girl,
the one that lives behind the mask && beneath the surface.

Author notes

Inspiration -
My Chemical Romance- Welcome to the black parade
Fall Out Boy - Fame Infamy
Taking back sunday- uhm... not sure which song.

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  • JHas6107
    September 8, 2008

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    Good

    sorry your feeling as you are, but the poem is quite impressive,it really shows true emotion, at least in ym eyes


  • whiterabbit.
    March 8, 2008

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    aw bby, this makes me want to cry. I'm sorry you feel like this. It's [e][x][a][c][t][l][y] how I feel too. Every day is exactly the same and I'm filled with so much self loathing.
    Bby, never forget how amazing you are. You're brilliant, not a fuck up. I love you sweetie and I love your wonderful poems


    • over the rainbow--x
      March 8, 2008
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      Thanks bby,
      I just feel really trapped recently.
      I'm not entirely sure why.

      Ohh bby, I am such a fuck up, it's unbelievable.
      but at least i'm dealing with it. lol

      I love you sweetie♥