Fleeing from the truth
strangers soon collide
perfection's imperfection
together forever; as one.
Moving too quickly
understanding; knowing...nothing
this alluring tranquilty
[an illusion]
immediate to lies.
[we are both the same.]
Author notes
10line max
prompt:SUBSONIC HARMONIES
pic credit:By Robin McQuay on Flickr
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE, Prompt contest 10-10 by Grey Mouser.
525 points, ended March 10, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Prewrites by CitrineSunrise.
900 points, ended March 10, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes 10 lines of poetry by tony yates.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wonderful
good luck and well written -
Congrats on all the shinys!
A beautiful piece. All the best in the contest with it
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lovely poem... congrats for the silver.
cheers!
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Coughs nice write Young lady, shwe glad I am not your mother reading this, I may be worried, wonderful again lil poet
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hahaha. lol. tanks
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Brilliant!
really.
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you lefted me speech less, in from of this beautyfull poem
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I so love this write
Unique as it is wonderful
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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Great write.
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