The melodies ring out loudly,
the harmonies not so much.
Harmonies ebb and flow
much like the ocean.
Rising and falling
back into the dark.
Sing to me sweet harmony
dance and twirl and sway.
Play upon the meolody
and subside once more again.
Author notes
Well hope you enjoyed it. The promt was subsiding harmonies.
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE, Prompt contest 10-10 by Grey Mouser.
525 points, ended March 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Music! by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended May 24, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment honestly please. But don't be rude. CONSTRUCTIVE CRISTISM is welcome. But don't bash me; I work hard.
Comments
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aww this is great, i live the peaceful and calm feeling to this write..makes it so much more enjoyable for the reader to read. great take on the pormpt and good luck in the contest!
take care
stephanie =)
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