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Love A Fair (Collaboration With Cricketjeff)

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Love A Fair


The first of April every year
The roller coaster comes to town
As this special day draws near
I lose my frown

With candy floss and bumper cars
The gallopers with smoke and steam
A rocket trip to far off Mars
Fulfil your dream

You choose the one you want to take
Your partner all the Summer long
You must take care as one mistake
The year goes wrong

You cuddle on the Ferris wheel
The Ghost Train where you steal a kiss
On swing boats every girl will squeal
One night of bliss

The hot dog stand romantic eats
A teddy won on ring the prize
With toffee apples other sweets
And big brown eyes

For when the evenings at an end
And saunter home with arms round waist
At the first gate you kiss your friend
Perfectly placed

September time the Autumn Fair
The two of you are still as one
The rides remembered as a pair
A night of fun

Every year the fair returns
And every year it feels so sweet
And everyone the story learns
The family treat

 

 

 


 

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    What a fab collab! Perfectly blended and oh such fun and happy feelings of summer love and going to the fair!

    Fabulous job both of you!!


  • Pearl-1
    March 9, 2008

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    great memories we all have of going to fairs..the thrills and laughs of the fast rides..good read..


  • arafura gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    The fair...! A lot of old memories brought back to a lot of readers! Great stuff! Thanks for reviving the memories!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    March 8, 2008
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    i can smell the funfair sue,,the spills and thrills ,the title is very clever as well, well done x