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Blindsided, Implosion by Mind

Dancing
An Empathic beat,
and then a jar

ring pause. The compensation
of sound, to a
dramatic, eye-to-eye
half-blind photocalyse
retreat, the mind’s
illusion of pictures of birth
to this idle stare
to the
ground.

A desire
for loud and chaotic,
an inverse
boom supersonic,
but the quiet
leaves longing.

(but this inner
vacuum of  a mannequin
with a hand grenade,)
I let go and
pause.

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