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Hard Lesson

I can't ask for forgiveness
It's not something I deserve
As much as I want it
I know I'll never get it

I can't do anything about it
Except sit and cry in shame
With tears pouring down
Nothing will ever be the same

I can't look at myself
Without feeling much guilt
And I'll never stop regretting
The actions that I've made

I can't change the past
But I'll try to change the future
I've learned my lesson
And I'll keep my silence

To the end...

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  • LoveToLaugh07
    March 15, 2008
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    Wonderful write. Sad, but wonderful. Good job expressing your feelings.


  • jacieluves 20you
    March 10, 2008
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    wow that is really sweet


  • james119
    March 8, 2008

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    Sad story

    leaves one hoping the narrator will learn the truth about forgiveness. You have expressed the problem well.


  • carissastepp
    March 8, 2008

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    wow. thats all i can think to say, wow. your poem flows nicely i think you write really well.
    and welcome to all poetry, hope to see more of your poetry soon!