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The star-spangled sky
in all its splendor,
the feel of your lips
so very tender,
my heart is captured,
my soul surrendered
to you.
You are the reason
I was created,
God intended that
we should be mated.
You are so dear,
my thoughts are inflated,
capsules of time
my love has created
for you.
Take my hand,
together we'll fly
into the clear and
endless blue sky,
blessed with the love
that takes us so high.
Heaven the goal
for love so true,
God's final reward for me
and you.
~ . ~
Maureen Halasovski - March 8, 2008
Author notes
Dedicated to my husband, Michael.
Link to love songs:
http://www.llerrah.com/midi/lovemed.mid
A contest entry
- HUGUENAUTIES CONTEST # 30 FOR HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by huguenauties.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Pretty.
You have witten a very nice poem for your husband. He is lucky that you can put your thoughts down for him to read. Saying how much we love one another is real nice, but to have it written where we can reread it whenever we want is so much better. I would have liked to have been able to hear the vidio but it keeps on cutting out. I enjoyed reading your poem though.
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Thank you for your nice comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem I wrote for my husband. Sorry you couldn't hear the video. Here is the URL for the video at youtube:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=vFbvJUAlTUw
Just click on the link and it will take you to the video at youtube. Enjoy!
Maureen
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This is a very nice song and I'm touched by it.
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I have a question, I'm new to this,
how do you get Youtube videos on here?? Everytime I try, it says soemthing about the video doesn't have something so Its a random video to allpoem?? -
Goodonya Maureen
on your HM.
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excellent~
I read the words and listened to the music as well
I know how much you love and how devoted you and Mike are toward one another.....
Love and trust in a marriage are beautiful things...even when other things aren't going well...You are there for each other....
Best of luck in the contest..
This is definitely a winner in my book
Love you sis
Susan~~~
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Thanks a lot, Sis! I'm happy you felt well enough to comment on my poem. I really appreciate it! I miss you and hope you had a nice day today. Mike and I had a quiet day. The Easter bunny forgot to visit us.
Love you, Sis!
Maureen
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Dear Maureen,
For this belated observation
I hope that I may be forgiven.
I'm suffering acute stagnation
although by conscience lately driven.
As you know, with Edna's son, Paul staying with us, I've been expected to help entertain him and have not visited AP much until this morning when, having been told by Joan that there are only five days left before this contest closes, my conscience has compelled me to start reading and commenting before anyone else wakes up and starts wanting breakfast!
This is a beautiful poem written for Mike which I'm sure will give him great happiness.
Good luck in the voting, Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)
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love it
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Dear Maureen, Such a beautiful poem dedicated to Michael.It's wonderful to feel the devotion you have for him, it shines from your words. I listened to the music, it is so lovely. I loved reading your poem so much.
Love Hine
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Dear Hine,
Thank you for your very nice comment. I'm happy you liked my poem and the music.
Love,
Maureen
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What a lovely past, present, and future!
A warmth of security that all would long for!
a very neat form, too!
Terry
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Thank you, Terry! I'm really happy you liked it!
<3 Maureen
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Beautiful!!!!
You know that feeling......The on that gives you goosebumps? Well, this did it for me.BonnyMiss
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Wow! Thanks for letting me know, Bonny Miss! It's been awhile since I've gotten goosebumps..I'm glad my poem, etc. made you feel that way.
Maureen
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This is a beautiful poem, Maureen.. and Elton John is one of my favorites, I like your preentation with not only the poem, but the video and wedding prayer
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Thank you, Dee! I really appreciate hearing from you about my poem and presentation! I'm happy you liked it!
<3 Maureen
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With yours poems I not only get something to read but I get a show too, thanks!
The music fits perfectly and when read while playing it sort of blends together to create a harmonious feel.
Can you eat lions? Sorry, I was being too normal.
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My pleasure, Sir Ima! Thank you for your nice, normal comment. I enjoy receiving both kinds from you. I've never tried eating a lion and I'm happy to say a lion has never tried eating me!
<3 Maureen
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Hi Maureen,
Your poem to Michael is lovely. I can feel so much devotion within your words.
Very beautiful, I enjoyed reading it.
Love Jen
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Thank you, Jen. I can't say we don't have bad days but the love is always there to make the bad days better and the good days a real pleasure!
Love,
Maureen
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Dear Maureen,
A beautiful dedication to Michael.
Such a wonderful gift God has given the both of you.
Thank you for entering our first monthly contest and good luck in the voting.
Love Joan.
PS. Please sign your name at the end of your poem.
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Dear Joan,
Thank you for your nice comment! I came here because I just remembered that I didn't sign my poem. Thanks for the reminder, anyhow!
Love,
Maureen
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This is very pretty, a fresh inspiration for us to enjoy. I like the rhyme scheme and you have rendered it gracefully. Many blessings to you and Michael for continued harmony and happiness.
All the best in the contest.
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Thank you, Margaret!
I appreciate your good wishes!
<3 Maureen
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