love blowing bubbles
within troubled waters
drown hopeful hearts
seeking light's compassion
yesterday's thoughts
gone in a flash
future hopes and dreams
dead upon pool's bottom
memories rest in peace
In a list
A contest entry
- Delightful PIF Quickie. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended March 8, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great take on the prompt 
Love it thank you for entering.
Delila
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This is great Be well
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Fabulous write, great imagery. Best of luck to you!
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Excellent
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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