My tears fall at your feet
But you no longer care
I scream out your name
But you’re no longer there
I really want to hate you
But my heart wont allow
I want to be with you
But I don’t really know how
You like someone else
And even tho I still love you
I wish for your happiness
Even if its with someone new
So now I’ll stop writing
For there is nothing more to say
And now I’ll say goodbye
Maybe I’ll be with you again
Someday.
Author notes
Ya its short but it gets my point across. This is the shortest poem I've ever writen. Enloy
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A contest entry
- Gravity: Love Poems Of The Saddest Kind by Fey Absinthe.
500 points, ended March 11, 2008, 15 entries
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aww sad intense emotion straight from what my heart is trying to say well done
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Has a very good flow and reads through very nicely.
Good work.
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I like it being short nonetheless
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we always feel like we can never love another, but it will happen. alot of times u get closer to finding a more even wonderful person. torment can weigh down the esteem for relationships in the future. i know from experiences about this. nice display of emotions here.
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a soulful poem with delicate words erupting straight from the heart...that still beats within the purity and the dignity of the love...which is real and pure....the dimension of a poetic expression is divine...i am glad i read it...all the best...thank you.
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Its so depressing. I know how it feels to love someone and find out they nolonger love you
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