arrange my flowers
in vases of love's poetry
murals of music
myra
2002
Author notes
This senryu is applicable on all visions of beauty: a flower addressing a poet; a lover addressing a lover ... I tried to stick to the original form, but to resound a timeless voice.
We are all but shadows, drawn as murals of love's music ...
Written February 9th, 2002
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always have liked that form, and this is lovely. I love the 'murals of music' ... music is such an enormous force, but is so ethereal... it can be very simple and complex at the same time. It can speak without words
very lovely!
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oooh I love it. Very short and sweet. Romantic and all about love. Wonderful detail work and flow of words. It was a pleasure to read.
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I needed to read flawless and beautiful pieces of poetry today and I've come to the right place. This was simply beautiful! I love the words you've chosen for this haiku and the title is just..Wow! You are amazing! Great work and thank you for sharing
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its beautiful what you have written here. simple and richly symbolic all at once. its shrouded in mist and clear to the heart, something basic we have all felt. you have put it on paper so well.
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Bravo! I enjoyed this haiku and you had the guts to name it. I love to name everything I do. When I first came here I entered a haiku on the Haiku Group contest, I of coarse named it. Some woman hater in the group named myron chastised me so bad that I withdrew it and I stay as far away from that group as I can. I love your work and I love this piece. Amera
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Poetry and music have a lot in common.
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lovely write
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excellent
This is a beautyful hiaku -
don't touch it!
all the love in life
and poetry flowers fall
with beauty and smiles
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Yes Yolanda ... as I said, my flowers and your poetry ... :0)
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Thank you L, B & S ... when I read your poems, it inspires me tremendously ... so what you see here is often 'our' work!
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It comes together like a song i love with the lyrics
'Come together right now over me!' Very beautifully
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I got this one. Thanks.
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oy....wow... I dont have words.
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You are so good at these! Lovely!
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Well said, S! Thanks
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a collaboration in life - everything fits and moves together :)
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